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WARNING- THIS FIC HAS A LEMON IN IT.

Sasuke cautiously crept into the kitchen. Good – he had the place to himself, away from his parents’ restrictive admonitions. Grinning mischievously, he climbed on the dangerously wobbly stool and peered around the benchtop. Soon the abundant bowl of variegated fruit caught his eye. Greedily, he reached forward for an enticing yellow one, and was just about to chomp into it when his wrist was grabbed, stopping him.

“You don’t want to eat that, otouto,” said Itachi rather wearily.

“Why not, aniki?” asked Sasuke pleadingly, his natural curiosity being strong. “Have you had these before?”

Itachi blinked. “You should wait until you’re older before you try to eat lemons,” he answered, rather exasperated.

Sasuke pouted. He didn’t like the limitations of being young. “It’s not fair! I want to do everything adults do!” he shouted, but obediently placed it back in the fruit bowl. Itachi breathed a sigh of relief, and started to turn away.

Sasuke looked wistfully at his aniki. Ever since Itachi had advanced in his position, he never had time to play with him. Plus, being an affectionate child, Sasuke liked to hug people, but Itachi never seemed to go out of his way to do that.

Smiling, Sasuke let himself fall off the wobbly stool, knowing that Itachi would never let him get hurt. He giggled as he found himself wrapped in his aniki’s arms, lying on Itachi’s chest since Itachi had cushioned the fall with his body.

“Aaah,” groaned Itachi, placing a hand at the back of his head. Sasuke was smirking at him, satisfied. Itachi raised an eyebrow, resigned to Sasuke’s attention-seeking ways, but couldn’t get mad since it always warmed his heart at how eager Sasuke was to be with him.   

“I’m going to eat that lemon now,” stated Sasuke, smirking at the incapacitated Itachi, and got up to reach for the fruit bowl.
Lemons are a funny fruit. :) :iconlemonsamaplz:

This piece is dedicated to anyone who's been insulted, belittled and oppressed by those who actively attack authors of 'lemon fics'.

Personally, I've come to terms with my dark side, in terms of HAVING a dark side - I'd rather this than live in fear of it existing and stressing out in denial. (of course it needs to be kept in check, but I'm just not worried about it and don't see the need to take a moral stance against others)

If you have a different opinion, that's OK... but on a VERY RELATED point, please express yourself in a courteous and respectful manner, and I'll do the same. :)

:iconfortehlulzplz: <- er, just imagine there's something else written on the flag. :ninja:
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:iconitachi-iz-awesome:
itachi-iz-awesome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
:D (Big Grin) 
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itachi-iz-awesome Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
I LUV THIS LEMON......t'is my favorite kind Meow :3 ...best lemon EVAAAAA
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dazza1008 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
:)
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XD1411 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is funny! X) XD AHAHAHA!!!!! 'Lemon fic'! Literally! HAHA! By the way, what does lemon mean? (Besides the fruit.)
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Sex. And thanks :3
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:iconxd1411:
XD1411 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for telling me. And you're welcome! :D
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:iconbritain-and-paris:
Britain-and-Paris Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... best... lemon... EVER!!!!! XD
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:iconpassionatepremise:
passionatepremise Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
I love lemons too-there's nothing wrong with Smut these days! ;)
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Yes, it's good for vitamin C. :nod:
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passionatepremise Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:giggle: <3
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DeidaraIsAGirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
:iconlickplz: cause

:iconsourplz: effect
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
heh heh :D
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:icondeidaraisagirl:
DeidaraIsAGirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
lol. this definately had lemon... lots and lots...

:iconitalyraveplz:

:iconiwantitplz:

:iconilikeitplz:
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
^^

Glad you liked!
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:iconjaymystique:
JayMystique Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
That, my friend, was indeed a lemon :D
I love it :hug:
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Thanks ;p
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zodiacgal Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol, sasuke was an evil genius when he was younger......
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
;p Glad you liked!
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AyreChiNoTenshi Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011
THIS FIC HAS A LEMON IN IT!!!! :lemon:
LOL!!!
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:icondeidaraisagirl:
DeidaraIsAGirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
so much lemon it should be illegal :iconteheplz:
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
;p Glad you liked!
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chibiwaterwolf Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i was not expecting that.
LOVED IT ANYWAY!
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Thanks! Glad you did! :D
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chibiwaterwolf Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconawesomefaceplz:
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DragonsBloodyHead Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol I thought it would be a lemon lemon. Until I finished it I never got it.
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Heh heh. x333

:iconlemon-sama:
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Gaaralvr16 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010
awww!!! that was CUTE (and a total shokcer!!!) good job thumbs up
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
Thank you! :D
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tanya3286 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Professional Writer
d'aaaaww :heart: :heart:

~~Itaaaachi... I wanna hug too!! :iconiwantitplz: :love:
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2010
Aw! :3
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:icontanya3286:
tanya3286 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2010  Professional Writer
>>:iconitachiuchihaplz:<< :meow: ~Indeed! ;D
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ItachiCosplayer77 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its cute :)
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010
Thanks ;p
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rambo4567 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
lol that's funny:)
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
Thanks XP
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itachisakura4 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
nice. i failed epicly. oh well really good though
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
I fooled ya? :icondawwwplz: Thanks!
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itachisakura4 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
yes u did. ur welcome
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victimofadr3am Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
Mwahahaha! I fell for it. :iconteheplz:
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dazza1008 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
:#1:
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Addictivemind Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009  Student Artisan Crafter
this is terrific!!! i love it, of course you can always tell whos looking for what when you see their comment on this story now ;)
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Indeed - the young ones on my watch list didn't get it, which was good. :)

And thanks!
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Coradensha670 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
The warning said "A lemon,". Also. no censors. I just love it when people do these. :3
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009
:giggle: Thanks! We need more! Lemons are a lovely fruit! :dummy:
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:iconcoradensha670:
Coradensha670 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love to eat them
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Derrot Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
I knew it was going to be a literal lemon as soon as I read the warning! XDD

That was cute, though =3
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
Heh heh! Smart cookie. x3

Thanks!
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Derrot Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
You're welcome! :D
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MyTragicLover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009   Writer
*gigglesqueak* Awesome "lemon", mate
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:icondazza1008:
dazza1008 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009
XD Thanks! ;) I think you 'got' it. ;p
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